Ohey, not bad! It actually usually drives me crazy when people colour pages, because blargh they are bad at it, and it's like, of course it's going to look nice -- the lineart is nice no matter how crappy the colouring job is!
Criticism-wise, the face looks flat without shading. XD; But the gradienting for the hair and pants looks pretty good.
I usually hate it when people make really strange coloring choices like making everything pastely with some bright colored background. I dunno, it usually just makes the whole thing too blinding sometimes X_x;
As for the shading, I only used what there was originally. I was thinking about adding some of my own, but was worried it might wreck it XD
*mostly colored it to possibly use as a profile layout, and I'm not even entirely sure if I'm really gonna use it after all*
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Date: 2009-06-29 03:13 pm (UTC)Criticism-wise, the face looks flat without shading. XD; But the gradienting for the hair and pants looks pretty good.
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Date: 2009-06-29 03:48 pm (UTC)But is good first attempt!
Late responses laaaaate
Date: 2009-07-05 09:11 am (UTC)As for the shading, I only used what there was originally. I was thinking about adding some of my own, but was worried it might wreck it XD
*mostly colored it to possibly use as a profile layout, and I'm not even entirely sure if I'm really gonna use it after all*
I really need to stop being on my RP accounts all the time XD
Date: 2009-07-05 09:14 am (UTC)*as said above, was worried that additional shading might make it look too weird or maybe worse... =/*
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Date: 2009-07-05 03:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-06 11:10 pm (UTC)